One of my not so random scribblings... - Lews said it was beautiful, so...

[Lanfear57]

just be yourself. i dont care if theres something wrong with you, dont try to hide it ill only feel betrayd. try not to miss me, or depend too much on me. dont make our entire life revolve around me. dont pour all of yourself into me, cause when im gone, what will there be left of you? dont pretend like im perfect, cause im nowhere near there. laugh at me, argue with me, make me angry sometimes. we all need to be reminded that we are in love with a human, not an angel. be angry at me sometimes. make me work to keep you, too. a trophy unearned has no value, so how could a love, unpursued? dont let me take you for granted. i always lose what ive "always" had. and i dont want to lose you. and sometimes, push a little past the fences we put up, dont always listen to what i say. sometimes everyone wants to lose control, to be put somewhere they didnt ask to be.

id like ya'lls input pls

[Tobias]

that is a very powerful scribbling. It is very poetic in the sense that it is basically describing the REAL relationship.

No relationship is perfect, and mankind keeps on trying to find those perfect relationship. If i were the people in that poem, i would feel lucky, because they know waht their relationship really is, and that it isnt ever going to be perfect from start to finish.

I feel wise

That is all

[Therin]

*poses as someone non-lews*

And he was bloody right!! That's amazing!

*runs away*

[starlitdancer]

Wow. Very impressive, Lan.

[Selrahc the Evil]

you never cease to amaze me Lan. I have followed your work for the last year and you always seem to write just what I'm thinking or just what I need to hear to go on.
this latest piece was very powerful and truthful. keep scribling.