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Shurikane
Dim Panties As String
Joined: 24 Sep 2002 |
 Posted: Thu Sep 25, 2003 9:39 am Post subject: |
Anesthesia
Should I feel more alive now?
It's one more day after school
After work, after a drive, after lunch
Sky blue, clouds gray, sunshine
Traffic lights, ads and signals
It's more more week in my life
After projects, after trips, after meetings
Grass green, asphalt black, flowers
TV shows, movies and books
Should I feel more alive today?
Or is it all the same thing?
Am I senseless and alone?
Or is it an illusion from depression?
Hmmm...
Should I love my eyes?
It's one more painting to look at
It's another act after another
It's shows repeating over again
It's a wierd thing; story repeats itself
It's one more dash of color
It's just another chemical reaction
It's just another stimulus
It's just that I'll see again and again
Should I love my eyes?
Or am I seeing bland colors?
Am I senseless and alone?
Or can't I see the people waving at me?
Hmmm...
Should I cherish the music?
There's one drum beat
There's another guitar riff
There's another synth note
There's another wacko sound
There's music on twenty-four seven
There's eleven stations playing the same thing
There's songs stramlined until they break apart
There's just one more ultra hit on the billboard
Should I cherish the music?
Or is it all useless?
Am I senseless and alone?
Or can't I hear the people taking to me?
Hmmm...
Should I feel more alive now?
Should I love my eyes?
Should I cherish the music?
Should I keep asking questions?...
Hmmm.
I want to see something else and get away from everything.
I want to hear a different music, and sounds I can't describe.
I want to feel some new colors and sensations.
The thrill is gone, Stan. The thrill is gone.
I want to stop going around on and on.
I want to discover myself a new, real passion.
I want to escape my people and join another tribe...
I want my life to taste something. |
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starlitdancer
Otaku of the Stars in the Sky
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Joined: 03 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Nov 04, 2003 9:41 pm Post subject: |
I like this.  The words flow nicely, and I like how you started out with a question, gave a descriptive answer and came up with more questions. I also like the last line; it sums up everything well. Good job. |
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Selrahc the Evil
true Evil's creator
Joined: 18 Mar 2003 |
| Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 2:04 pm Post subject: |
I really like this. It has a resounding truth to it. Great job. |
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