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Lanfear57
psycho kitty
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Joined: 09 Jun 2003 |
 Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2003 4:15 pm Post subject: story of mine |
ok guys im writing yet another story that will probably flop on its face within 2 months... heres the start
where am I? she thought I don't recognize this place. Am i dreaming?
she was in a corridor, with many, many doors on both sides. some doors were open, anywhere from wide open to just barely cracked, but most of them were shut. trying one, she found it to be locked. she then saw one that had a plaque on it, saying "5th bday, '91". looking in, she saw a dark room playing a video of her fifth birthday, disaster that it was. the picture is clear, showing her father staggering in, drunk beyond thought, and falling onto the table where she and her friends were eating cake and ice cream.
is this my mind? then where is... now?
she wandered down the hallway, looking behind doors when they were open, not bothering if they were closed. with every step, anticipation and fear grew within her. how do i get back to my body? |
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Tobias
*explodes*
Age: 38
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Joined: 17 Jan 2003 |
| Posted: Fri Oct 17, 2003 5:12 pm Post subject: |
whoa...intersesting. Gives you that real "Out of Body" Experience 
I likes it lan...cant wait to read the final product!
That is all  |
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Selrahc the Evil
true Evil's creator
Joined: 18 Mar 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Oct 28, 2003 1:53 pm Post subject: |
Very interesting Lan. I can't wait to see what you write next. |
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Enon
Minion of words
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Joined: 04 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Fri Nov 07, 2003 11:30 am Post subject: |
Interesting it kinda reminds me of a combination of the Yu-gi-oh ep where he goes into his mind and sees the two sides of it; a chapter from the book '1984' and a lifetime channel movie, all blended together. |
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starlitdancer
Otaku of the Stars in the Sky
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Joined: 03 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 12:00 am Post subject: |
Lanfear - I like what you've posted so far; are you going to continue? |
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Van Saar
Rookie
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Joined: 28 Sep 2003 |
| Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 12:07 am Post subject: |
Sounds interesting so far. I'd like to read more. |
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Lanfear57
psycho kitty
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Joined: 09 Jun 2003 |
| Posted: Wed Nov 19, 2003 3:16 pm Post subject: |
I promise I'll post more....
JUST AS SOON AS I FIND THE THING!!!!
GAHHH!!!
sorry...
minor breakdown there...
yah. it's lost somewhere in the abyss i call my bedroom.
and no, i can't just write it off my head because it isnt there anymore...
i wrote it down to get some more space in my head... |
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