A great comic idea

[Lewis Black]

Here's one I thought whilest playing Breath of Fire 4.

A young man wakes up in the middle of a rickity old house, his face bleeding with a large cut going diagonal down his face. Not knowing who he is or where he is he walks around the house. Hoping to get a some of his memory back by walking around the house he hears a blood curddling scream, which in turn becomes an un-earthly moan. This gives him a sudden headache. A small yeat ancient voice whispers one name. "Amon.". After that he sees a bloody woman standing by the corridor. Yet this girl seems rather odd. Not only is she dressed in white along with being covered in blood, but she seems rather transparent. Soon she chases after our hero. She cuts him off in the next room, cornering him by a statue. With nothing left to lose our hero pries the axe from statue and gets ready to fight. The ghostly woman stands there. From anger to shock to horror she fades away. Then another voice echoes. "No mere human can life that axe! Ye must be of...netherwordly blood.". The sound of his voice sounds valiant, almost from an honorouble knight. Which is what appeared before our hero's eyes. As the fires from the candles around him burned to life the house seemed to awaken from its dark slumber. Before our hero stood a knight in black and gold lined armor, his face covered by a demonic skull like helmet. The knight spoke again, "I must thank you! My name is Alastor. The great knight! What is yours?". Our hero didn't know his name. But until then he came up with a new one until then. "My name...is...Sora. Sora Soze." Sora said. The knight thanked him once again and asked if there is anything he could be of service for. Sora did not hesitate to ask him to help get his memory back. The knight only laughed and heartfully agreed. Fetching Sora some clothes they departed into the snowy winter day.

Along they're travels Sora learned that the reason behind his amnesia is due to the fact that he is incomplete or for lack of words, half of his normal self. During a massive fight Sora's original body got seriously wounded and to survive he had to split into two different entities. But one side, his angelical side, harbored the original forms hate and insanity. Thus going on a worldwide purge of those who were "Unclean"
In order for Sora to succesfully merge and become one again he must obtain the powers from 8 Ma-Na gaurdians. Along his travels he meets a young idol singer who's popularity is quickly growing, the new queen of the Netherworld who is succubi names Victoria, a gun weilding preist, a young cheiftan boy, and an undead man named Raven.

Yet it seems that there is more in store for Sora and his friends as they look for these mysterious guardians. Tumbling onto train heists, national conspiracies involving a group of powerful politicians planning a One World Government that is ruled by various corporations, and the race between churches to make the perfect Messiah. There are alot more as well.

[Terin]

I think "idea" is an understatement.
I'm thinking plot, and maybe you should insert "Chapter One" into your "idea"

[Lewis Black]

Truest. But I went off into a tangeant there. I always do this with all my ideas.
I was also thinking of doing a little sidequest with my characters. A competition called Goth Goth Revolution. Basically its DDR with death/black metal. Sora enters as a last ditch effort to raise some money because Alastor keeps spending it on booze and butterscotch krimpets.

[Lewis Black]

Reload time!

Thought of another one while listenin to Luther Vandross' Love Power/Power of Love.

Luthe is a somewhat average person. He goes to an everyday high school. Except this high school is known for it's good looking girls and teachers. But Luthe seems to have a problem, he can't seem to get a date. Trying year after year until the final months of his senior year he gives up. He comes to the fact there will never be a love of his life. So after a few weeks of depression he finds something he deems better. Treasure hunting. Coming across his first chance (finding a run down mansion) he journeys in hoping to find rare antiques. He soon stumbles onto the mansion's guardians, two dogs with flames portuding from their backs. Whipping out his sword the "Black Slayer", a family heirloom, he succesfully kills the two dogs. As he is wallowing in victory the souls of the dogs enter him, giving him the ability to run quicker than the fastest horse. Then Luthe finds his power, the ability to absorb the souls of vanquished monsters and use their abilities. The more he thinks about it the more he says to himself that he feels like his ability is a rip-off from a famous action game with robots.

The next day he wears the fangs of his first deceased demons and runs by the job title "Demon Slayer" or "Exterminator". But one thing bothers him (a bit). How did he inheret these powers? Did he get them from setting forth on the mansion's property?

The character Luthe in a way is tragic as he gives up hope for finding his true life and just blindly pursues a dangerous life of false comforts from money.

[Motts]

Ooh, I'll draw 'em.. I even have a sketch ready for Sora, meet me on aim and I'll show you.