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Therin
Gloompf. Iggle!
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Joined: 24 Sep 2002 |
 Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 11:58 am Post subject: Gunshot |
I'm sorry.
I'm sorry I couldn't help.
I'm sorry I didn't love.
I'm sorry you couldn't love me.
I'm sorry I wasn't good enough, and I'm sorry I couldn't try.
I apologize for my inability to succeed.
I'm sorry to those I hurt, and I'm sorry I toyed with your minds.
I'm sorry I screwed up.
I'm sorry I couldn't help it, sorry I didn't have the strength.
I'm sorry I was weak.
I'm sorry I whined.
I'm sorry for my incessant complaining.
I'm sorry if you feel bad.
I'm sorry for being pitiful.
I'm sorry for being smarter than I should have been.
I'm sorry I was unable to complete what I started.
I'm sorry for being arrogant, for being narcissistic.
I'm sorry I obsessed over love.
I'm sorry I tried to find it. There is none for me.
I'm sorry I failed.
I'm sorry I couldn't stand up and walk on my own.
I'm sorry I couldn't plow through the shit.
I'm sorry wasn't determined.
I'm sorry that life got the better of me, and that I wasn't stubborn enough to stop it.
I'm sorry I let you down.
I'm sorry I couldn't work through my issues, and I'm sorry I let them show.
I'm sorry for you.
I'm sorry for the pain you must endure.
I'm sorry I couldn't bear it with you.
I'm sorry for those of you who will call me a coward.
I'm sorry that this is the only way out.
Goodbye. |
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Kai
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 4:25 pm Post subject: |
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Therin
Gloompf. Iggle!
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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Kai
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 4:34 pm Post subject: |
It means 'huh...' I just thought it was interesting but I didn't really know what to say. |
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Therin
Gloompf. Iggle!
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 5:06 pm Post subject: |
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Kai
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 5:21 pm Post subject: |
Hey why would I want a high post count?
Oh look I almost have 300!!!! |
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Doot
Cute and Non-Abrasive Hyper Hypo
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 7:11 pm Post subject: |
Oh look! You are off topic! |
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Minosheep
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 7:14 pm Post subject: |
OH LOOK! DOOT IS TEH SEXAY! (Five points for me... hehehehe...)
Oh, uh. Good work of art. Yes. |
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Therin
Gloompf. Iggle!
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 9:49 pm Post subject: |
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Daijaga
Chosen of Luck
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| Posted: Thu Apr 29, 2004 9:58 pm Post subject: |
Defiantly soemthing differnt, General - Im not used to reading your poetry.
I found the piece really frank and striaght forward. I can definatly relate to it in a lot of the ways, especially with some of the things going on in my life personally right now. A really whole freakin lot. It made me feel really good just to read it.
Thats a personal feeling, though. Taking the piece independently - I like the timing of the words, but I would have liked the "I apoogize for my inability to succeed. " part to have occured further down to break my contentration, make me stop and look at what I was reading. Other than that the pace is really strong, conveys your feelings well. It did to me anyway.
As always, your #1 fan |
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