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Sakura Saku-chan

Gender:  Joined: 22 Sep 2002 |
Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2002 6:40 pm Post subject: |
Gah...didn't have the guts to post any of my poems, but I finished this one earlier today:
I'm falling out of love with you.
Let's keep it strong.
I need to see your face again.
To make my love last long.
It seems you love someone else.
Is it because I'm young?
Well you wait a little while?
Or watch time be hung?
I just wanted to love someone.
And my heart chose you.
But now we are fading.
There is nobody else new.
My lvoe for anyone else
is starting to face.
I wouldn't go with anyone else.
My love is not for trade.
I want to be with you all my life.
I hope you will give me a try.
Time please hurry up for me.
Before this love of mine will die.
~Makenna
Eden
Richardson~
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BWS-1 Otaku Lord

Gender:  Joined: 25 Sep 2002 |
Posted: Thu Nov 07, 2002 9:35 pm Post subject: |
Sooo luvly!!!
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Sperrit Chosen of Earth

Gender:  Joined: 16 Oct 2002 |
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 3:25 am Post subject: |
Wow. You have reminded me of something, Sakura. There is probably nothing more compelling than young love. Your poem is very touching and it rings true. Thank you for sharing that with me. It reminded me of things that I would have otherwise forgotten. Thank you.
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Doot Cute and Non-Abrasive Hyper Hypo

Gender:  Joined: 15 Sep 2002 |
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 9:29 am Post subject: |
I am so proud of you, my lovely sister. It seems the writing touch hasn't skipped you at all. |
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Shino Fade into this fantasy, caught in the web of time

Age: 49 Gender:  Joined: 15 Sep 2002 |
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 9:30 am Post subject: |
That is very nice Sakura.
Keep up the good poems.
Even though I think this one is a little deep on love for you age, it's still very good. : : |
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Sakura Saku-chan

Gender:  Joined: 22 Sep 2002 |
Posted: Fri Nov 08, 2002 10:32 pm Post subject: |
Hehe, I'm just a deep writer. I can't help it! I love to write!
You're welcome Sperrit -hug-
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