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Shurikane
Dim Panties As String
Joined: 24 Sep 2002 |
 Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 9:58 am Post subject: |
Elise
Elise
What should I tell you?
It's been a while, a good year
Since I last saw you...
I'm here, drinking beer
Astonished at your return
Will you come sit here?
My life's been a burn
Like dying over fire
And up here you turn...
Everything's changed now, isn't it?
You pop in view with your pink and white dress
Fate acts kinda wierd, doesn't it?
You're here in my face with a red trenchcoat
You put it down, you talk to me!
You've come to get me out of this bad mess
Nevermind the past, let it be!
You know just like I we're in the same boat...
Elise
Elise
Quickly I tire
Just couldn't do it alone
Wanna go higher...
I'm dead to the bone
Will you come and walk by me?
No more being alone...
Stay here, beside me
I'm in the need for someone
Stay here, old buddy...
Now the dream is gone
I wake up in sweat and tears
Please, a friend, just one...
It was all a fake, wasn't it?
Just a temptation to get me living
And the scheme did work, didn't it?
I hope for her to keep me company
Out I go, I spit on the day!
Her name's inside my head and still ringing
What frustration, Fate, go away!
I've stopped listening to your symphony...
Elise
Elise
Save me from my tears...
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"Remember when /b/ was good?"
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END: 750
ACC: 800
AGI: 600
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BWS-1
Otaku Lord
Gender: 
Joined: 25 Sep 2002 |
| Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 12:29 pm Post subject: |
Good poem, or song. In such work I have trouble sensing if it's either pure fiction or reality. ... or a mix of both maybe |
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Mika
Otaku Knight
Joined: 05 May 2003 |
| Posted: Wed Sep 10, 2003 3:27 pm Post subject: |
Wow thats a really good poem (or whatever your calling it). I really like the transition from ryhming sometimes and then going back to normal. It really makes you think...  Great job Shuri |
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