Coast of Ivory

Minosheep · Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2004 6:38 am Post subject: Coast of Ivory

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/9907703/

Daijaga · Chosen of Luck Gender: Joined: 17 Dec 2003

Wow, Demonic, thats is a killer fricken peice. I mean seriously, that was really powerful. Some of my own best stuff I've written just like that, spur of the moment kind of deals, that I really just didn't think about, they js sort of made sense or flowed out of me. I can tell this is sort of the same case here for you, as the peice is extraordinary in a way that I don't think could have relaly been planned. I generally also don't like a lot of poetry that doesn't "rhyme", but I think the wording and pacing you used sort of made the words click together in the same way rhyme does.

Im going to venture a guess as to the subject matter, is this about elephant pouchers on the african coast?

Minosheep · Posted: Thu Aug 19, 2004 11:42 am Post subject:

Wow. That's high praise.

Thanks. It is about poachers, yes, though it doesn't express any especial disdain. Just a story.

Daijaga · Chosen of Luck Gender: Joined: 17 Dec 2003

*nod* It was from a neutral perspective, not condecending. Still, great peice. The praise was only deserved, not awarded.