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Where is My Happy Fairytale? |
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Bekuki
No Longer a Memebr of Pocket Otaku-Permently
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Joined: 11 Oct 2003 |
 Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 5:13 pm Post subject: Where is My Happy Fairytale? |
Behold, puny humans! Bekuki's latest venture into the poetic field! ^_^
-Where is my Happy Fairytale?-
Where is my happy fairytale?
You took it away from me, love.
Where is my Prince Charming?
He was you.
He still is you.
A world in which there are no fairytales.
Snow White had no prince,
Sleeping Beauty had no kiss,
Cinderella lost her slipper in vain.
A palace with a silver ball has been deined to me.
Where is my happy fairytale?
You ripped it when you ripped my heart apart, love.
Where is my Prince Charming?
He went beyond my reach.
A world without happy endings.
Snow White would sleep forever, like dead.
Sleeping Beauty would ne'er wake.
Cinderella would have no ball.
My happy ending was torn from the pages.
Where is my happy fairytale?
You rewrote it, love.
Where is my Prince Charming?
He was erased.
A world in which bad triumphs over good.
The Prince marries the Wicth, Ariel forgotten.
Rapunzel withers away all alone.
Peter Pan falls to Captian Hook.
Like my heart falls to you.
Where is my happy fairytale?
There is none.
Where is my Prince Charming?
In the bed of anthor. |
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Khymerion
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| Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 6:32 pm Post subject: |
A beautiful but disenchanting poem... I wish more could be said on my part to match that prose but the words escape me...
Good work on this piece... |
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Zzyxx
*bursts into flame*
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Joined: 30 Sep 2004 |
| Posted: Mon Jan 24, 2005 11:06 pm Post subject: |
Very good, i like the choice of words and the messege portrayed, i can relate to it, but i have no lady to call my own... I might be convinced to post one of my works here. |
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