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Kiyomi Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit

Gender:  Joined: 15 Oct 2003 |
Posted: Tue Jan 25, 2005 12:17 am Post subject: So I found some of my old poetry... |
BURNING
My eyes burn with a torrent of tears.
liquid fire races down my face.
Searing, shining droplets
that penetrate my entire being.
My mind burns with a cyclone of thoughts.
A spiral of heat, seeking to destroy
all that I fold dear;
wanting to leave only my charred memories.
My soul burns with a maelstrom of emotion.
each chaotic flame tugging
at my very existence,
pulling me in a myriad of directions.
My heart burns with a ray of hope.
Warm love cascades down to me,
setting me aflame with the desire
to just be there with the one I love.
2001
NO
No! I screamed at the wall,
But it did not listen at all.
No! I pleaded to the sky,
But only the breeze answered with a sigh.
Stop! I shouted to the air,
But like the others, it did not care.
Stop! I cried to the day,
But why should it listen, anyway?
Please! I begged the night,
But it did not take away the bite.
Please! I asked the waving tree,
But it was to busy to help me.
Help! I dropped to my knees,
But no one heard my pleas.
Help! I looked all around,
But not a friend could be found.
2002 |
_________________ The great and confused Kiyomi, cat girl with an obsession for rabbits and genetics! #1 fan and wife of Excel.
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Enon Minion of words

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Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 7:42 pm Post subject: |
Nice. I really like the imagery that came to mind in 'NO' and the word choice in 'Burning' is nice as well. |
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Keslyn Is a tickelish squeakie toy

Age: 38 Gender:  Joined: 23 Jan 2005 |
Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 7:53 pm Post subject: |
They're both so good! I think NO is my favorite, but burning is awsome too! Do you have anymore? I'd love to read them. |
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Kiyomi Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit

Gender:  Joined: 15 Oct 2003 |
Posted: Thu Jan 27, 2005 8:32 pm Post subject: |
I have LOTS more, but I cannot remember which ones I have posted here before. LOL. So if I repost, I apologize!
BROKEN WINGS
Broken wings try to open.
Broken wings strain to fly.
Broken wings spread, but pained.
Broken wings that have been crushed.
Crushed by every tear ever shed.
Crushed by memories too painful to stand.
Crushed by the comments of cruel hearts.
Crushed, never more to fly.
Never more to grace the sky.
Never more to soar over clouds.
Never more to fill with air.
Never more to rise with my spirit.
My spirit that pulses faintly within me.
My spirit that struggles to exist.
My spirit that seeks freedom.
My spirit that is what carries me forward.
2002
WARNING: About child abuse
BEATEN
Characterized by a glistening tear,
a girl sits alone trembling with fear.
She hears the shouts and screams,
and cannot escape, even in dreams.
She knows it is coming and she quakes
as her little hands uncontrollably shake.
She cannot run, nor can she hide,
from this emotional and physical roller coaster ride.
At last it comes, swiftly and sure,
and fills her with pain so pure
that she cannot even stop to yelp
or think about getting help.
A downward motion is all she sees
before her senses all freeze.
Blackness fills her very mind;
she is unconcious one more time.
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_________________ The great and confused Kiyomi, cat girl with an obsession for rabbits and genetics! #1 fan and wife of Excel.
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Enon Minion of words

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Posted: Sun Jan 30, 2005 4:24 pm Post subject: |
deep lyrical and though provoking **wanders off to think** |
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Kiyomi Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit

Gender:  Joined: 15 Oct 2003 |
Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:33 pm Post subject: |
Hmm, maybe I should post some happier ones. They have all been depressing so far.
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EAGLE’S FLIGHT
A stirring of feathers,
A gleaming of eyes.
Wind rippling
Across the top.
Head lifts,
Beak clicks.
A screech fills
The still land.
Flapping its wings,
Grasping at air.
The final thrust,
To become aloft.
Carried out
Over the land.
Uplifted wings
Gliding on air.
A stirring of feathers,
A gleaming of eyes.
2002
FOREVER LOVE
Hold me close to you.
Let me hear your beating heart.
Keep our love as strong
as the day that it did start.
Drive away my hidden hurts
and all my deepest pain.
Wash over me with your love
like a pure spring rain.
Never let me slip away
from your loving embrace.
Your eyes a vast horizon
as I gaze into your face.
Passions come; passions fade,
quick to live, swift to die.
Love, though, is forever,
like a never ending sky. |
_________________ The great and confused Kiyomi, cat girl with an obsession for rabbits and genetics! #1 fan and wife of Excel.
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Enon Minion of words

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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:43 pm Post subject: |
I didnt mean to imply that they were. It just poetry that I like tends to make me think. |
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Kiyomi Adopted sis to Alexander and Sperrit

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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:47 pm Post subject: |
Enon wrote: | I didnt mean to imply that they were. It just poetry that I like tends to make me think. |
No, I didn't think you were implying it. That was a notation I made for myself. I was posting a lot of depressing poetry, so I figured it was time to change it up. |
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Enon Minion of words

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Posted: Mon Jan 31, 2005 8:53 pm Post subject: |
Oh I did a poem once is somewhere on the thread of poetry. Change is good so now you can mix it up a bit.  |
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