Proto's story.

[Protoman730]

It was a busy day at Aindriahhns' pub, when suddenly the door opened to let in a man. Now usually one wouldn't think much of this due to it being what doors are for; but this man was differant. A strange vibe seemed to emenate from him that soon quieted the usually noisey pub, he walked to the bar and took a seat. It was then that the bar man got good look at him, he was wearing a long dark sleeveless coat, a red shrt underneath, dark brown jeans houlstering two strange six shooters made of a strange coppery material, a dark wide brimmed hat and two gauntlets ending in a pair of leather gloves. The stranger sat down and lifted his hat showng his face, he had messy brown hair, grey eyes, a chisled jaw and a long scar running from his chin to his cheek bone. the bar man looked at him and asked "So what'l it be?" The stranger rested his arm on the bar and replied "I'll have a beer, a stiff one. And some pretzels." He looked at the audiance he had gatherd and said " I expect after the entrance I've made you expect me to tell my life's story?" There was a collected nod from the crowd. "Alright then, my name's Protias if you were wondering; and let's just say I'm from far
away...." [TO BE CONTINUED]

[Protoman730]

Yeah, this stinks just pretend this never existed, I will just wait until I am a PO to have a bio.

[shadokastur]

Dude you're always going to be your own worst critic but don't be so hard on yourself unless you feel like you've made a mistake. 'Sucks' is a word that should be reserved for things that truly suck like rush hour traffic or running out of quarters at the laundrymat with a load in the washer...

[RivaOni]

im the same proto, i dont dent to like anything ive done.

but that was good, well its the sort of entrance i usually make anyway

[Silver Adept]

"The regulars here are used to grand entrances. I think they would be more surprised if you didn't monologue your life story after sweeping in. They're an attentive audience, sure, but they've seen this done before."

The source of the voice is above Protias.

"Might be better, though, to save it for the role-playing boards, because that way you can have interaction. A good start, though.

Either that, or there's a thread in one of the forums that's all about putting down your origin story. You could use that one, too."

[Protoman730]

Well, I've started something here and I means to finish it.

And thus did Protieus (Finally got it right!) begin to tell his mysterios tale. He lived in a world very different to Miniopia called Xevotopia, here resided a multitude of races; from wizards to xyborgs, from giant bugs to the very elements themselves!
Long ago an evil war lord knon as Genok was defeated by a group of warriors knon as the Xevolvers; but many years later Genok returned, and soon began making his army. This was not unknown thanks to the kings wisest prophets, and they soon predicted the chosen ones destined to face the dark one.

Protieus was one of these chosen heros, he was soon found and trained in many arts from the different factons, He was trained in combat by the Atlantean army, disciplin by the Shadow Blade ninja clan; balance with nature by the Meta beasts;
wisdom by the Arcasters and honer by the Quick Slingers. When his training was finished, he was a man ready to save the world.

He was given special technologie called the E-VAC, this allowd him to copy any weapon, armor and form he wanted.
He changed into his quik slinger uniform and set off on his journey...
[TO BE CONTINUED]

[Protoman730]

Protieus embarked on many a journey from stopping a typical brain-in-a-jar mad scientist to facing vast armys of cyborg pirate skelatons. He had crossed paths with many a hero and villains, all the while questing to end the wrath of Genok.

Finally, he arrived at the dark citadel of Genok, a HUGE caslte of darkness filled to the brim with unimaginable horrors that would drive any lesser man insane! Wave after wave of enemies were slain on proto's way to the main chamber where Genok resided.

And there he was.... [TO BE CONTINUED] Feed back please!

[Protoman730]

Standing ifront of proto was Genok himself, an abomination of wire, steel and flesh; his body covered in dark runes that if spoken in mortal toung would make your eyes melt out of their sockets. And in his hand, there was the largest, sharpest, evilest big evil sword ever made! The blade seemed to pulse with dark life; forever hungering for the blood of it's enemies. But there was something els about that sword, infact the same could be said for Genoks entire body! There was a strange aura eminating from him that seemed to be of another world.

Finally Genok spoke "WHO DARES ENTER MY CHAMBER?" "The name's Protius, and it's the last name your ever gonna hear." "YOU ARE A BRVE MAN INDEED, BUT THAT THAT IS NOT ENOGH TO TO DEFEAT ME! MY PLAN HAS COME TO FRUITITION ALREADY! YOU THINK I WOULD BE CONTENT WITH THE ANNIHILTION OF JUST ONE WORLD? HA! I HAVE FOUND A NEW PLACE TO PLAY, AND IVE ALREADY PICKED UP A FEW THINGS! THERE IS NO CHANCE OF ME STOPPING BECAUSE OF SOME COWBOY! HA HA HA HAAA! SAY GOOD BYE TO YOUR WORLD PROTIUS!

Proto quickly pulled out his aptly named "Big Guns" and fired two perfect shots,
but as quickly as they were fired Genok destroyed them with one slash of his sword! "I GROW BORED OF THIS. PREPARE FOR THE END OF YOUR WORLD!"

Suddenly the entire world started to quake! Soon things were crumbling from existence itself! And with a sudden flash Genok was gone. As Proto stood there dumbstruck at the end of he world; a rift seemed to open up behind him as a hand
suddenly pulled him in.

"It was not wise to face such power without fully understanding what it was."
"What the?! Who are you? Where am I?" "My name is not important right now. Where we are is this, the space between demensions. When Genok was defeated he was accidentily sent to my world. He kept himself very secret and slowly regained his power. He then went back to your world stronger than ever.
Your world can be brought back; the secret lies in Genok's power. Destroy him and you should be able to bring back your world." Soon they came upon a portal of shining light. "This is were we split. We will meet again in time. For now remember, if you go into a pub called The Kilted wench, avoid the fish platter!

And with that the mysterios saveour dissapeared and Proto found himself in a grassy field. As he looked on to the horizon he wondered if he would ever see his world again. "I need a drink, a stiff drink."




[THE END FOR NOW] Please post!

[Ultrawolf]

I like it. Very interesting. You should just edit your old post though and avoid double posting.