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Tobias
*explodes*
Age: 38
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Joined: 17 Jan 2003 |
 Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 2:32 am Post subject: Flames in my footsteps |
He got up from the pew of the church. His rosary lay around his wrist, as he reached for his gun. Guns clicked from all directions, trained on one man, dressed drably. His hair covered his eyes in all of its shag. With a smile, a bible caressed his fingertips, as he gripped and released it behind him. Drawing the barrel quick, he fired. The first bullet left true, piercing the gunner's heart, spewing life on the carpet. The second and third bullets didn't make their mark, and the price he had to pay was in blood and iron. The stinging made him feel alive as he stared at the gaping wound in his shoulder. Grabbing a missle with his good arm, a steady toss at the man diverts him long enough for a trained shot, lodging a bullet square in his left eye. One would say the last thing he saw was just the O of the barrel as it exploded and everything went dark. The pain was still there...reminding him that he was alive...that this was what he was meant for. The fifth and sixth bullets remained in their chamber as he lept over the pew, a man's bullets screaming like banshees lusting for life. The fifth bullet tore through teh wooden pew, sending wood all around the gunner. The sixth bullet found home when he landed on top of the man, the gun barrel pressed up against his skull. He didn't feel anything...just whatever was still going through his head. One would think that it was "Sh*t...", some others think it was what he had had for dinner the night before. It didn't matter...the blood was all over the floor, soaking into the carpet. Thank God in his temple that it is a red carpet.
The rosary around his hand dripped with blood, as if the Lord weeped. He walked down the row leaving bloody footprints, each one igniting on fire as if he was unwelcome in His house. He just looked back and smiled, and continued praying. |
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Kothar_Isk
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Joined: 22 Nov 2005 |
| Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:18 am Post subject: |
Tobias there are 50,000+ words in the english dictionary, but how can i tell you how great that was with such limited resources? |
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Tobias
*explodes*
Age: 38
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Joined: 17 Jan 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Nov 22, 2005 4:51 pm Post subject: |
lol...I thikn thats the first time i've ever heard that complement before. I like it!
*explodes*
EDIT: This is a product of listening to Jimi Hendrix's "Voodoo Child" Right after watching "Once Upon a Time in Mexico"
*explodes again* |
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Kothar_Isk
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| Posted: Wed Nov 23, 2005 4:19 am Post subject: |
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50,000+ words in the english dictionary, but how can i tell you how great that was with such limited resources?
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that was from a Valentines Day card that i gave to my now fiancee this year. only I just replaced "how great that was" with "how much I love you".
she was totaly speechless for 20 min and she shed a single tear in that feeling of overwhelming happiness. I was really beautiful. I just that that your fiction desearved the same compliment. |
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Tobias
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Age: 38
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| Posted: Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:43 am Post subject: |
i feel quite complemented by that senor...thank you very much! |
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Demorg I'tal ruri
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| Posted: Sun Dec 04, 2005 3:08 am Post subject: |
 wow wish I could write like that |
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