found poems - i wrote a while ago

Rollergirl · ... like a FOX! Age: 43 Gender: Joined: 23 Sep 2002

(untitled)

From where mistakes become evident,
from where actions speak softly,
yet define a being in which life is
as evident as sunshine in a May field.
These places spur a creativity
unwilling
to step forth in a conscious thought,
shining through the edges,
a light as blinding as sunshine
in a May field.
Relates,
Replays,
Repeats
obsolete in existence
as we forge our way through the unending
journey of cycles and streams of consciousness
where one question becomes blindingly apparent,
translucent in meaning and devoid of straight answers
and convoluted explanations:
why.

Life’s unending motivation over
obstacles and perils,
through branching paths and strait-a-ways,
left to be answered by the ages,
left an inspiration to generations
unborn but ready.
I am ready.
I may succeed
in determining a clue
but left in the dark silhouette
of an amazing creativity. With
red lips,
gray eyes,
and flaming hair,
left a complex contradiction
of crazy thoughts and therapy.
Never revenge, always forgiveness.
Never hate, always acceptance.
Never me,
Never you,
Never defined.
Always trying.

___

Movement

Reflections of Audrey
Skewed in view
Permeate through as thoughts
Wander
Confused and breathing
Like any human
Left behind until light
Dawn – a beautiful thing
As lives converse on the park
Bench
Hazy, dazed and confused
Joining, building breaking –
Remaining
As time, friends, enemies
Move on
Knowing, despite the fact
Acknowledging the opinion
While you are left again.
Perhaps preparing
Perhaps dancing
Perhaps pondering
Still,
Left.

please say what you think. i like feedback. and feel free to suggest titles for the top poem

Shino · Posted: Tue Oct 22, 2002 1:40 pm Post subject:

These are really good RG. I see a bit of "togetherness" in both of them. You should post your stuff more often.

Sperrit · Chosen of Earth Gender: Joined: 16 Oct 2002

I agree with Shino. These are good! If you got more you should post 'em! And as far as a title for the top one I say just go with something that feels right, cause I don't think I'd be able to capture the essence as well as you could. These are beautiful.

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