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Excel Zero
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 1:01 pm    Post subject:

well they always say write what you feel eh? Smile

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 10:24 pm    Post subject:

well... i just cant write what i feel. but im pretty good at pretending what i feel... like ill show one ...im nothing like what this poem makes ppl think im like.... AT ALL! but alota pl at my school liked it. so tell me what you think (p.s. sorry if it seems lik im trying taking the spotlight off yours.if youd like you could just delete it i wont be mad) ok here goes..also sorry in advance for not puting any punctuation. i mwas in a hurry lol...i hope u can make sence of it

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twisted dead bloody red out of mind out of tears going insane drowing in fears twisted mind psychotic cutter twisted little freak mind laying in a gutter help me now i screamed out loud stop me now i want to be proud cutting bleeding killing dying living dead rotting flesh bloody tears eat it fresh black heart red tears pain is good your worst fears cut deep in the flesh watch yourself bleed lie there in your puddle deaths what you need psychotic insane no pain no gain yes im psychotic compleatly insane lifes full of fun its all just a game i love to bleed yes im a freak its my favorite color watch my blood leak pain is so relaxing it takes the sadness away ive lived hell through my life i wanted to bleed today

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 10:28 pm    Post subject:

As long as it comes from you it's worthy
That's what I believe anyway Smile

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Kajiru
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 10:30 pm    Post subject:

well actualy i cant write about myself at all...i dont know why. all the poetry i wrote had nothing to do with me or the way i felt or anything like that. its wierd but its me where talkin about....ME!

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 26, 2004 10:39 pm    Post subject:

well no I understand, I just meant it CAME from you, not about you.

It was your words.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 8:05 am    Post subject:

lol i know what you meant..that last post was an accadent cause i didnt think the first post worked ...lol

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 27, 2004 1:26 pm    Post subject:

i totally understand Smile

I really would like to learn to write a bit better. Also reading. I am a very entertainment based person, (in case you can't tell) So I like my tv and such. Not that I think it's bad, as far as I am concerned, as long as I am happy, then that's what matters. Maybe I can get Kiyomi to bring me back to the joys of reading

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