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Kobrakai
Senior Otaku
Joined: 20 Nov 2003 |
 Posted: Mon Aug 23, 2004 10:30 pm Post subject: Death In A Dream |
I wrote a story for Mass Media about what'd it would be like if death didn't exist, which I turned into "how would you abuse immortality if you had it?". This story is about one man's recieving that mighty gift and his abuse of it.
Check it out here: http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/10040644/
Feedback is really appreciated. |
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"I'll hide you in my walls. Your body will never be found. I'll wear your skin as a suit, pretend to be you. Your friends will like you more than they used to." - From First To Last ~ "Ride The Wings Of Pestilence"
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starlitdancer
Otaku of the Stars in the Sky
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Joined: 03 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 2:50 am Post subject: |
Hey Kob, I'll check it out as soon as DA maintenance is finished. |
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"Do not strive to be the person you think you should be. Strive to be the person you are." -Therin (General Mythral) |
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Kobrakai
Senior Otaku
Joined: 20 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 4:33 pm Post subject: |
Awesome. Sannk you. |
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"I'll hide you in my walls. Your body will never be found. I'll wear your skin as a suit, pretend to be you. Your friends will like you more than they used to." - From First To Last ~ "Ride The Wings Of Pestilence"
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Katana
is a confusion burrito.
Age: 36
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Joined: 22 Jan 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 5:24 pm Post subject: |
Breathtaking.
Really, it makes me think. |
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"How nice -- To feel nothing, and still get credit for being alive." --Vonnegut
"if i were you, I'd stop pestering the redhead with the temper that can destroy the souls of grown men and women and little children along with their bodies and the house they're hiding in" -My Fiancee (About me, of course.)
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Kobrakai
Senior Otaku
Joined: 20 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Tue Aug 24, 2004 9:13 pm Post subject: |
Thank you very much. |
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"I'll hide you in my walls. Your body will never be found. I'll wear your skin as a suit, pretend to be you. Your friends will like you more than they used to." - From First To Last ~ "Ride The Wings Of Pestilence"
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starlitdancer
Otaku of the Stars in the Sky
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Joined: 03 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 9:25 am Post subject: |
Wow. I'm still reeling (I just read your story). It's intense, moving, thought-provoking. I think I'll re-read it to see if there's anything I missed the first time around. |
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Kobrakai
Senior Otaku
Joined: 20 Nov 2003 |
| Posted: Wed Aug 25, 2004 4:25 pm Post subject: |
Thank you very much. When I was reading it aloud in class, I was shaking nervously (not intentionally) and everyone said that I was making it very intense... I was told that when I exclaimed a part of the story, everyone popped back a bit. Thanks again for your feedback. I enjoy contemporary criticism, oh, oh so much. |
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"I'll hide you in my walls. Your body will never be found. I'll wear your skin as a suit, pretend to be you. Your friends will like you more than they used to." - From First To Last ~ "Ride The Wings Of Pestilence"
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